tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post7286522143700360772..comments2023-06-16T09:55:29.319-04:00Comments on Mommy Dourest: Loose EndsIvyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-13782670587070180012013-07-19T11:09:52.637-04:002013-07-19T11:09:52.637-04:00Thanks, Kymm! :)
Hers is definitely a "nowhe...Thanks, Kymm! :)<br /><br />Hers is definitely a "nowhere to go but up" situation. Maybe she will use this as a catalyst to get her shit together. Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-18208102656976308952013-07-19T10:42:15.342-04:002013-07-19T10:42:15.342-04:00Terrific story, Ivy!
"Oh, shit" are, I&#...Terrific story, Ivy!<br />"Oh, shit" are, I'm betting, her first words.<br />I'm feeling optimistic and positive today, so I'm wagering she'll take the advantage and commit an entire life change. She certainly could use one!kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-51916686368523269252013-07-18T22:15:49.096-04:002013-07-18T22:15:49.096-04:00Now YOU just made MY day! Thank you so much for th...Now YOU just made MY day! Thank you so much for the wonderful praise! I was hoping all the editing didn't lessen the impact of the ending.<br /><br />And, yes, because you took the time to comment, a kitty will live to see another day.Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-69900626575468392002013-07-18T16:59:50.680-04:002013-07-18T16:59:50.680-04:00Thanks, Björn! Something tells me her life is abou...Thanks, Björn! Something tells me her life is about to get a lot more exciting. ;)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-56764815774534432022013-07-18T16:58:57.653-04:002013-07-18T16:58:57.653-04:00She'll certainly wish she were dead when it al...She'll certainly wish she were dead when it all comes back on her. Thanks for reading! :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-91175765467180057812013-07-18T16:48:29.477-04:002013-07-18T16:48:29.477-04:00Thank you so much, Alicia! Taking the red pen to m...Thank you so much, Alicia! Taking the red pen to my own writing is not nearly as much fun as editing other people's work. :) But, I'm happy with how this turned out. It was definitely a challenge, though. <br /><br />I really appreciate your kind words! Heading over to read your entry now. :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-43235580053702330082013-07-18T16:44:11.898-04:002013-07-18T16:44:11.898-04:00Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-77467467221402736822013-07-18T16:31:38.864-04:002013-07-18T16:31:38.864-04:00I gotta say, I ADORE the twist at the end! this w...I gotta say, I ADORE the twist at the end! this was really well done. <br /><br />Makes me want to read your original (longer) story to see what exactly you cut. But you know what, this story is perfect the way you edited it. <br /><br />Great job!! I think this story will win this week, or at least be runner-up (in my humble opinion).<br /><br />best, <br />MOV<br />ps-- did I save a dying kitten??MOVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782183723607923501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-8872485476221799812013-07-18T16:15:13.607-04:002013-07-18T16:15:13.607-04:00At least she don't have to be bored any more :...At least she don't have to be bored any more :-) Great writebrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-5833683336111911692013-07-18T14:10:08.810-04:002013-07-18T14:10:08.810-04:00I guess she planned a little too much. It's g...I guess she planned a little too much. It's going to be awkward dealing with all those people she gave a piece of her mind to :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-66313553558640843632013-07-18T13:00:17.405-04:002013-07-18T13:00:17.405-04:00This had me from the beginning, and held on until ...This had me from the beginning, and held on until the end. I was wondering what would go wrong along the way. I never guessed it would be THAT. Really well done, especially considering all the editing you had to do. I had to whittle mine down from 460 words or so, so I can imagine the work you put into this.<br />My response to the prompt: http://www.aliciaaudrey.com/blog/trifectaprompt-crack/ Alicia Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00281607401060737431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-46855507831210215772013-07-18T11:33:24.705-04:002013-07-18T11:33:24.705-04:00Great story with an ending that really made me lau...Great story with an ending that really made me laugh. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-47357583549217088312013-07-18T10:10:59.048-04:002013-07-18T10:10:59.048-04:00I bet she really wants to kill herself now. Or may...I bet she really wants to kill herself now. Or maybe someone will do the dirty work for her. Thanks for reading!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-23108111633175176482013-07-18T10:03:09.024-04:002013-07-18T10:03:09.024-04:00Whoops!!! Well, no wonder he is the ex, calling t...Whoops!!! Well, no wonder he is the ex, calling the police for such a minor, and no doubt deserved, assault. Jerk. :-P And now she has a huge mess to clean up, or try again. I wonder what she will do.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-45487875976976139402013-07-18T09:14:21.229-04:002013-07-18T09:14:21.229-04:00She definitely had it coming. I like imagining wha...She definitely had it coming. I like imagining what happens when everyone receives their letters. Yikes!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-48864032081589807302013-07-18T09:13:13.141-04:002013-07-18T09:13:13.141-04:00Thanks, Draug! So glad you liked it. :)Thanks, Draug! So glad you liked it. :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-52148152235977380002013-07-18T09:12:48.809-04:002013-07-18T09:12:48.809-04:00Thanks for the kind words, Suzanne!Thanks for the kind words, Suzanne!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-76543945220511126892013-07-18T09:10:43.161-04:002013-07-18T09:10:43.161-04:00You really are sick and twisted for laughing at th...You really are sick and twisted for laughing at this. We would probably be BFFs if we ever met. :) Glad you enjoyed it!Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-50677299516695630242013-07-18T09:09:16.742-04:002013-07-18T09:09:16.742-04:00Thank you! Suicide is no laughing matter ... unles...Thank you! Suicide is no laughing matter ... unless the person did a bunch of shitty things first and didn't succeed in killing herself. ;)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-61982988984161127942013-07-18T00:29:14.551-04:002013-07-18T00:29:14.551-04:00Haha! Terrific ending--can't say she didn'...Haha! Terrific ending--can't say she didn't have that coming!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00736632012288650571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-52738804871044942942013-07-17T22:40:25.080-04:002013-07-17T22:40:25.080-04:00Ah, irony. So delicious when it's so well-writ...Ah, irony. So delicious when it's so well-written like this.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-89882187118794701182013-07-17T15:54:35.737-04:002013-07-17T15:54:35.737-04:00Ha! Excellent! Love how her simple revenge on her ...Ha! Excellent! Love how her simple revenge on her ex-husband throws a wrench in her suicide plans. Great little story!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-47346809614126710372013-07-16T11:02:25.489-04:002013-07-16T11:02:25.489-04:00Loved it! It made me laugh too. What a sick sense ...Loved it! It made me laugh too. What a sick sense of humor some of us have. Great job! Would love to read more!Ashley Kagaoanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881825157237244934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-34400820497595809592013-07-16T10:31:52.386-04:002013-07-16T10:31:52.386-04:00hehe I know I shouldn't laugh or find this awe...hehe I know I shouldn't laugh or find this awesome, but I did. love the tone and pace of it all. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4093117644713466332.post-50628688892735069022013-07-16T08:24:53.235-04:002013-07-16T08:24:53.235-04:00Haha! Yeah, she's totally screwed. Thanks for ...Haha! Yeah, she's totally screwed. Thanks for reading! :)Ivyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933355170869547421noreply@blogger.com