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Monday, December 16, 2013

Just Put It on My Card

This week's Trifecta challenge: Write a 33-word piece to produce laughter and festive cheer.

Dashing to the stores
Those deals expire today.
Over ads we go
Drooling all the way.
Registers lit up;
Receipts eagerly signed.

What fun it is to shop until
My Visa gets declined!

25 comments:

  1. Very clever! My downfall is the one-click order from Amazon. I'm thinking of inviting the UPS guy in for dinner (since most of the deliveries arrive around that time anyway :))

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  2. That I can see happening... what a great way to celebrate Christmas...:-)

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  3. Oh, Jingle bills, jingle bills...

    This, Ivy dear, is hilarious!!!

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  4. Oh! The sound of those Laughing Registers gives me nightmares! LOL!!!
    Good one Ivy!!!

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  5. It's the most wonderful time of the year!

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  6. This is so funny. But,now I have "Jingle Bells" playing in my head to the "ka-ching" sound of cash registers!

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  7. I started singing the tune instantly. Story of my life~! :)

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  8. Ha! You and me both, sister!

    best,
    MOV

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  9. Nice. A shopping spree may be a refreshing prospective.
    -HA

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  10. This pretty much sums up the holiday season :P
    Brilliant work Ivy :D
    Awesome as always

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  11. Excellent! I couldn't help but sing it...

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  12. Omg that was hilarious!!! I sang along too! :)

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  13. lol. Very funny. well, maybe not for the cardholder. You may have a new hit tune. :)

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  14. great "jingle"! (VISA should adopt it.)

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  15. Very clever. I am forever allergic to credit cards. Can't personally handle them because I then spend way to much...so I paid them off and cut them up. If I don't have the cash now, I do without. ♥

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  16. Hahaha I hate shopping, but I loved the last lines. Funny, Ivy!

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  17. Damn credit card companies. Denying you christmas for your lack of money. So selfish. Good one!

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  18. My new favorite Christmas carol.

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  19. Ha!ha!Too cute!Happy Holidays Ivy and see u on 26th ,when I return from my trip,tc,love xx

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  20. I was singing this as I read it. Great piece!

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  21. XD Forealz! That's why I do all my shopping the day after, no one knows the difference. (;

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  22. I think I'm actually hoping mine gets declined just to stop the money from flowing out of my wallet.

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