This weekend's Trifecta Writing Challenge is to describe summer in 33 words.
Humidity overpowers air
Humidity overpowers air
Sleek becomes
frizzy, R.I.P. sexy hair
Stovetop hiatus; oven, be still
Tag you’re it, Mr. Grill
“No-Shave November” stretched into May
Fur's gotta go now; bare legs on display
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Dear poetry Nazis (myself included): The meter totally sucks, but please overlook that in the spirit of summer fun, OK? Thanks.
cute. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
Deleteaww haha nice =D
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it. :)
DeleteYep, and I have the unruly hair to prove it. :)
ReplyDeleteTag you're it Mr. Grill. Haha, I love it. Nice one, Ivy!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brian! My husband's firing up Mr. Grill at this very moment. :)
DeleteHa! Love this. Good to know I'm not the only one who participates in no-shave November. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm a huge fan of No-Shave November and December, and January ... :)
DeleteR.I.P. Sexy hair
ReplyDeleteoh, so true dat!
Right?! :)
Deletelove it, tag ur it, mr grill hahaha
ReplyDeletepoetry is better when old rules are swept away - thoroughly enjoyed! PS - another challenge! http://yepirategunn.weebly.com/2/post/2013/06/ligo-haibun-challenge-1406-2106.html
ReplyDeleteSometimes you just have to break the rules, right? Thanks for reading!
DeleteNice! Love the no shave til May. That should be a rule.
ReplyDeleteThank you! It's a rule in my house. ;)
DeleteWhat clever poetry (:
ReplyDeleteThanks! :
DeleteThis is such a delight to read. Well done! Thank you for linking up! Please be sure to return for the voting!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
DeleteLol, fuzzy legs - one year you do not shave . Then you look down there is nothing to shave. I never thought I would miss hair on my legs. Now my chin is another matter.
ReplyDeleteI don't think I would EVER miss my leg hair. Not a fan of the chin hair, either.
DeleteReally enjoyed your summer verses...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteGood playful tone, and so true to life!
ReplyDeletestovetop haitus... love it.
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